TASK 2 WRITING - 7.0+ / FASHION TREND

Many young people today spend too much time following the latest fashion trends in areas such as clothing and technology.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many feel that today's youth are frequently obsessed with the latest fashion trends, whether in clothing or technology. I completely agree that this may be carried to extremes. However, a greater emphasis on aesthetics is, in general, positive.

The primary argument against fashion's increasing primacy is that it is distracting. When individuals spend time and money on the latest smartphones or designer clothing, they are usually unable to allocate those resources to other aspects of life. They might overlook personal development if they are overly concerned with their looks and have less time and energy for socializing and career activities, such as interacting with friends and family, earning a degree, or certification. While this worldly obliviousness is undoubtedly prevalent among people, it would be a misconception to generalize it to all fashion enthusiasts.

The majority of individuals involved in fashion are purely aesthetic. In the past, functionality and efficiency were emphasized. For instance, Apple's Macintosh worked well but had an uninspiring design. However, when Apple's Mac was launched, the design culture shifted dramatically. Apple created attractive personal computers that were elegant and worked excellently. This now-dominant trend indicates that consumers are no longer satisfied with basic functionality, whether in phones, clothing, or personal items. Rather than that, they require sleek, intuitive designs, which compels businesses to fulfill expectations, resulting in more attractive products and, by implication, a more beautiful environment.

In conclusion, while I believe fashion addiction may be distracting, its overall effect is elevating. Nonetheless, it is still essential for individuals to strike a balance between their desire to appear well and their inner qualities. (266 words)

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